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WAVES
Alone
I wake up
In daydreams
Dulce and saline
The surface oh, so
Smooth looms above
But I’ll stay below
'Cause I’m deep
In the ocean
Not in love
And tides and I
Particle and wave
Ripple on the beaches
And back to sea again
Not needing to linger
Anywhere, anywhen
Or care about you
Or roll and turn
Inside my shell
Without you
Yes, you and
Your submarine
Your heat-seeking
Missives and missiles
Crashing on the shore
Breaking sonic peace
Profane not profound
Inscribed in the sand
I’ll never pour over
In sobs and sighs
Swimming away
To the sunrise
As long as I
Wake up
Alone
-- by M. Alice Chown
Alone
I wake up
In daydreams
Dulce and saline
The surface oh, so
Smooth looms above
But I’ll stay below
'Cause I’m deep
In the ocean
Not in love
And tides and I
Particle and wave
Ripple on the beaches
And back to sea again
Not needing to linger
Anywhere, anywhen
Or care about you
Or roll and turn
Inside my shell
Without you
Yes, you and
Your submarine
Your heat-seeking
Missives and missiles
Crashing on the shore
Breaking sonic peace
Profane not profound
Inscribed in the sand
I’ll never pour over
In sobs and sighs
Swimming away
To the sunrise
As long as I
Wake up
Alone
-- by M. Alice Chown
Interpret as you wish
Edit -- Replaced Message in a bottle with 'Inscribed in the sand', as suggested by :devSnowmachine:
Edit -- Replaced Message in a bottle with 'Inscribed in the sand', as suggested by :devSnowmachine:
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Well, I really don't know much about the structure of poetry, so I'm just gonna tell you what I liked about what I interpreted.
I feel in this piece a feeling of relief in being alone. A bit bittersweet, but good in essence. I love that, cause I feel it's better to be alone than with bad company
I feel in this piece a feeling of relief in being alone. A bit bittersweet, but good in essence. I love that, cause I feel it's better to be alone than with bad company